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For most people, admittance into a top MBA program requires two
things: (1) that you have what it takes to get in, and (2) that
you sell that fact to the admissions committee with a first-rate
application. If you want to learn more about what it takes to get
in, read our article
on the subject. This piece will focus on the second part of the
formula--putting together a winning MBA application. Crafting a
superior application is more art than science, but is absolutely
critical to your chances of admission. The following is the method
we at Brody Admissions suggest using and it is the method our counselors
will use when working with you.
First, analyze your strengths and weaknesses to establish your
baseline level of admissibility. Second, create a story with themes
designed to augment and support your strengths while minimizing
your weaknesses. Third, use all the pieces of the application to
construct the story and themes (you’ve got to nail this one!!).
Fourth, follow through with attention to details.
Strengths and Weaknesses
This requires some serious introspection. Think about your past
accomplishments, career trajectory, performance in college, and
community activities. If you’ve taken the GMAT, consider your
score. Then, weigh these against the five criteria outlined in our
article, “What
Are the Top MBA Programs Looking for in a Candidate?”
To remind you, these criteria are (1) academic performance and promise;
(2) demonstrated leadership potential; (3) personal qualities and
interpersonal skills; (4) oral communication ability; and (5) career
direction and purpose. If you read our article, you should be able
to get a good feel for your strengths and weaknesses. Let’s
take Joe Masters as our case example (get used to seeing case examples—MBA
programs tend to use them a lot).
Joe is a 27-year-old brand manager at Procter & Gamble. He
attended the University of Illinois, where he received a degree
in marketing. His undergraduate GPA was a 3.6 and he has taken the
GMAT a couple of times—his best score is a 650. Joe has been
promoted three times at P&G and currently has two assistant
brand managers working with him. He has been responsible for launching
two major product extensions. He has also led the United Way at
Work initiative in his division at P&G, helping to raise over
$100,000 for the cause. Additionally, Joe has been active for the
last three years in Big Brothers/Big Sisters, serving as a mentor
to three underprivileged youths in Cincinnati. His reasons for getting
an MBA are a bit vague, but he seems to have an interest in pursuing
a strategy career, maybe as a consultant at Bain, BCG, or McKinsey.
He has also thought a lot about the financial upside to an investment
banking career.
With just this amount of information, we could rate Joe on the
five criteria. Academics: average to strong. Leadership: strong.
Personal attributes/interpersonal: strong to very strong. Oral communications:
unclear. Career direction and purpose: average. Remember that these
ratings are designed to calibrate him against the typical application
pool to a top MBA program. He has good prospects, looking like a
reasonable candidate for schools 11-20, but a “bubble”
candidate for the top 10 schools. Joe's clear strengths are in his
personal attributes, his community service and activism. He has
had impact on his community. His clear weaknesses are in his lack
of career focus and in the academic realm. The 3.6 is not bad, and
given that he has 4-5 years of work experience, it will not weigh
heavily. But the 650 is low for the top 10 schools. He also has
the potential to demonstrate leadership qualities: while his community
leadership is clear, his work experience still needs more explanation.
His oral communication skills cannot be judged by the information
given. It will be his job to make them apparent.
Themes
After analyzing your strengths and weaknesses, you should think
about your audience and their criteria again and craft a story designed
to emphasize your strengths and de-emphasize your weaknesses. With
Joe, our story would look something like this: Joe has a solid academic
record, particularly in quantitative subjects (if possible, emphasize
the portion of the academic record that means the most to MBA admissions
committees). He has shown continued development and growth in his
career, taking on more and more responsibility, and has led major
initiatives. He also has a passion for serving his community and
has had a major impact on individuals and organizations. Though
he has been very successful in his marketing career, he wants to
assume a greater role in the success of large organizations like
Procter & Gamble. He believes the only way to do that is to
develop an expertise in strategy. For Joe, getting an MBA at a top
school would be the best way to not only gain deeper knowledge in
the latest thinking in corporate strategy, but would help him jump-start
that new career.
We have outlined a number of themes for Joe: “successful
marketing career,” “impact on the community,”
“MBA jump-starting new career,” etc. Now we need to
fit those themes into the framework of the application.
Nail the Application
The sections of the application include the following: personal
data, academic record, letters of recommendation, work experience
(resume), activities & extracurriculars, essays, and the interview.
If you talk to admissions officers, you will realize quickly that
you really need to nail the essays and the interview, and your recommenders
must be well chosen. To truly nail the essays and the interview,
you have to get the content right—i.e., the themes, and you
have to do it with style. An essay with style is one that is well
written and compelling. Managing your interview means having presence,
being upbeat and reactive, and exuding confidence. So how do you
get the content right?
| Let’s take Joe, for example,
and use Kellogg's 2003-2004 essay questions: |
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Briefly assess your career progress to date. Elaborate
on your future career plans and your motivation for pursuing
a graduate degree at the Kellogg School. (1-2 pages double-spaced) |
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Each of our applicants is unique. Describe how your background,
values, academics, activities and/or leadership skills will
enhance the experiences of other Kellogg students (1-2 pages
double-spaced) |
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You have been selected as a member of the Kellogg Admissions
Committee. Please provide a brief evaluative assessment of your
file. (1-2 pages double-spaced) |
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Complete three of the following six questions or statements:
(2-3 paragraphs each)
– What is the most valuable lesson you have learned
in a leadership role?
– What do you consider to be your greatest accomplishment?
– Describe an ethical dilemma that you have faced
and how it was resolved.
– What would you have done differently in your career?
– Outside of work, I . . .
– Describe your most challenging professional relationship.
– I wish the Admissions Committee had asked me. .
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The first question fits well into Joe’s theme on career
trajectory. He should focus the part on “progress to-date”
on the impact he has had, and the leadership he has exhibited at
P&G, being careful to use specific anecdotes to bolster his
case.
For the second question, we would focus on the successful launch
of the two new products (maybe holding back on these when answering
the first question). Another good topic would be his United Way
campaign, showing the admissions committee how he would be able
to serve as an example for non-profit leadership in the context
of a Fortune 100 for-profit company.
The third question would be a good place for Joe to hit all of
his themes, downplaying his slightly less-than-impressive academic
record. In fact, this question is tailor-made to allow Joe to make
his best case possible for the committee.
These "3 of 6" questions should be viewed as opportunities
to complete your story and add the element of well-roundedness.
With the “Outside of work, I…” question, Joe could
talk about the life that he turned around when he took on a mentoring
relationship with one of his Little Brothers, showcasing his personal
qualities, or even take a chance and focus on an interesting hobby.
Admissions committees like to put together a diverse class. With
the “Describe your most challenging professional relationship”
question, Joe could establish his interpersonal skills by showing
how he turned around some work-related relationship and made it
work for the good of the project, for example.
The interview is where Joe must really shine in the “interpersonal
relationship” area, and where he should prepare answers to
the following questions: “When is an example in your career
where you’ve exhibited leadership?” “What are
your strengths and weaknesses?” “Why do you want an
MBA?” He can use his themes to craft an answer to each of
these with confidence that he is bolstering his case. The interview
is also the place to showcase oral communication abilities--no "ums"
and "likes", but lots of eye contact and clarity. Other
applicants are asled, "why did you chooseyour undergraduate
school, " or "Why did you go to work at X?" This
gives the interviewee the chance to show how he thinks about career
planning.
When Joe selects people to write his letters of recommendation,
he should choose at least one who has been in a position of leadership
at Procter & Gamble, preferably his direct manager or someone
else who knows him well. He or she should be prepared by Joe not
only with a write-up of Joe’s accomplishments, but even suggestions
as to what themes he most wants emphasized for the admissions committees.
Joe’s manager could easily write about how Joe has had an
impact on the organization through his leadership and drive. He
or she could also speak to Joe’s ability to work in teams
and his interpersonal skills. Joe’s manager should be encouraged
to show Joe’s ability through examples and anecdotes.
The details make the story resonate.
It doesn’t make sense for Joe to ask his manager to talk
about his academic performance or aptitude, though the manager could
talk about the United Way work.
Follow Through
Admissions officers tell us that there are a few common mistakes
that really kill an application. Some applicants put the wrong school
name in one of their essays. Others send them in with obvious spelling
errors and grammatical mistakes. Many applications lack polish.
Applicants just don’t take the time to get it right. Usually
they don’t get it right because they procrastinate and finish
their application at the last minute.
Having credentials and themes is great, but without a professional
application, you're sunk. You need to set a schedule for yourself,
or have your Brody counselor set one for you, where you have milestones
and due dates— for both drafts and final essays, for asking
recommenders to write your letters, for setting up interviews (and
preparing for them), etc. Then you need to stick to that schedule.
You may believe that you can just sit down on a Saturday and throw
together a solid application for each of four MBA applications.
That's just not going to happen.
This is one of the chief benefits you get from hiring an independent
counselor, e.g. from Brody Admissions. We serve in part as process
coaches, making sure you stick to the plan with plenty of time for
polish and professionalism. Good admissions counselors make sure
you don’t just walk into an interview without having spent
the time considering all the questions they might ask—and
preparing your responses.
Admissions officers are trained to identify those applicants who
have rushed their applications, and they don’t look at them
favorably. Why not give yourself every possible advantage? Make
sure you’ve followed through on the details.
Demonstrating Career Focus
As you follow all the steps in creating a distinct and professional
application, one theme should flow through all of your work. The
theme is “focus.” You have to demonstrate to the admissions
committees that you have thought seriously about your career and
why an MBA makes sense for you right now. In their minds, you need
career focus in order to make this a success. Admissions officers
may realize that a significant number of MBA students change their
minds during their time at business school. That focus is not the
same when they leave as it was when they came in. But, in fact,
they still have focus; it is just redirected. No dean of admissions
wants to believe that he is accepting students who just want to
take a break from the “real world” for a couple of years.
He wants to believe that he is helping a whole slew of potential
matriculants take that next step in their plan towards greatness
and responsibility.
You might want to give some thought to this. Make sure that the
MBA is the right choice for you. If you are unable to articulate
a clear career plan, at least enough so that admissions committees
would buy your story, maybe you aren’t ready to get an MBA.
Of course, you could obviously just lie on your applications and
in your interviews—but then you might end up with a career
that doesn’t fit your personality or interests. Find your
career focus before you apply, or speak with a Brody counselor if
you are struggling with it. Your applications will suffer if you
haven’t found that inner voice.
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